2.1
All: mime opening your shops more clearly
Nina: stagger your entrance just a bit more
Nina/Benny: both of you lean out the window and share the
lesson
Benny: don’t lean back away from Nina when she gets near you
Nina: after ‘dolor’ don’t turn back to Benny until ‘Besame’
Nina/Benny: look out, not at the people on the street
Mary: bring up the principals’ mics earlier
SmEnsemble: louder vocally on your entrance…1-2 dynamic
markings
**Miller: Spike the Furniture Placements**
Benny: dial in those quieter harmonies…they’re close
2.2
Vanessa: slow up your entry…you’re not sure if you even want
to check in w/Usnavi
Graffiti: try and make the situation less awkward with Sonny
on your ‘new painting’ line…bail him out of the scene
Rosarios: Good exit
2.3
Scene Change: Rough transition…**can we double the music?**
Abuela: Tell him exactly what you’re doing with the
money…you’re not working it out at that moment, you’ve already decided
Abuela: Show him what you’re talking about…that’s why you
turn out to the audience
Usnavi: Show HER what you’re talking about…that’s why you go
downstage
Usnavi: The parents’ dying is to himself…he’s overwhelmed
Usnavi: don’t look at abuela until the ok after ‘I worked
with what they gave me’
Usnavi: make the offer to dance, then do the dance
2.4
Kevin: you can start the entry earlier by a couple of beats
Nina: you can start your entry a bit earlier as well…that
opening sequence is dragging just a bit
Kevin: bigger beat before ‘think very carefully…’
Kevin/Nina: getting breathy in this scene
Benny: back up the verbal intensity physically…you sound
intense, now show it
Kevin: remember to be farther downstage when your wife is
singing to you (2nd note)
Nina: remember to counter downstage a bit farther when
Camila’s singing to you
Camila: punctuate some of your lines to your family with
gestures
Camila: don’t exit quite so fast after your last
‘enough’…take a beat
2.5
Ensemble: too slow on the entry
All: wonky start to ‘carnaval’
Piragua: the ‘Wepa’ gesture looks dismissive, not enthused…get
excited!
Dani: teach her to improvise, actively..show her
Ensemble: sing out!
All: justify…every line, every ‘wepa!’, every gesture must
have a reason underlying it
Benny: groove with the ensemble during Usnavi’s monologue
Ensemble: groove that movement circle…it looks rushed and
stiff
Graffiti: thanks for trying to get the principals to
participate
Benny: nail down your solo…
Sonny: he’s pissed…go off on your cousin!
Ensemble: groove to yourselves on Sonny’s rant…you’re not
paying attention, you’re having too much fun!
Usnavi: get ‘East Secaucus’
Principals: match the ensemble in their dancing
2.6
Solid transition everyone!
Stage Right Scaffold: come out earlier still
2.7
Ensemble: don’t just stand there…want to hear more, the news
Usnavi: most of the group knows what Alabanza means…tell the
non-latinos what it means
Nina: hold your eye contact with Dani and Carla as they come
in on ‘Alabanza’
Ensemble: look out at the audience; don’t turn your bodies
2.8
Nina: discover the letter…you haven’t seen it before
Usnavi: look to comfort her when she doesn’t respond to your
last line before the song…help her justify that silence (you started doing that
instinctively, and it was a good choice)
Nina: really ask the questions you ask in the song
Kevin: use your hands…find a way to incorporate a bit more
variety
Kevin: take a beat to formally ask Camila about selling the
business
2.9
Salon Girls: don’t rush out onstage…pace it well, but keep
it relaxed
Dani: a bigger reveal on the address…this is gossip like no
one’s business; treat it like every other piece of gossip you’ve relayed during
the show
Vanessa: much bigger reaction
Salon Girls: Vanessa leave after getting her new address and
hugging it out with Dani; this is a change
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